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I propose that every eighteen-year-old should be allowed to legally drink alcohol There are many reasons that made me think of this idea First I thought hey when I turn eighteen there are so many responsibilities and options that Im going to have to make The first one was the right to vote Im thinking that if our government believes that we are old enough to make the important choice of picking a president and other government officials then they are realizing that we are mature enough Another thing that caught my attention was that also at the age of eighteen youre old enough to go and sign up for the military Again the government is recognizing that eighteen year olds can make important decisions for themselves Which sacrificing your life for your country is Another thing that the government allows use to do is drive a 1 ton machine around at the age of sixteen If we look at Europe we see that they dont have any problems with under age drinking We can also buy guns Now if thats not more crazy then drinking I dont know what is I believe that since the government says that we arent smart enough to drink then they should move the voting age back move the age of enlistment and the draft back move the age of selling guns back and make us stop paying for so many taxes as adults So I purpose that instead of taking choices away from what the government calls adults we increase the punishment of drinking and driving Teenagers drink with the law in place anyway Im trying to say that if you do drink and your eighteen you should be responsible or else youll be locked for a long time I really believe that people will be responsible if you give them a chance and make the laws harsh enough If people over the
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