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This story is actually a mix of about three terribly misguided kids that have committed a crime The first story is about Derek King 14 and his brother Alex 13 that killed their father by beating him to death with a bat last November in Florida They received seven to eight years in prison Next Lionel Tate 14 beat to death a six-year old and he got a life sentence Then the last story Nathaniel Brazill 14 got twenty-eight years for killing his middle-school teacher The rest of the article continues in saying that possibly the cause of them doing this is a combination of bad genes and a bad environment Right I dont to an extent agree with the whole bad childhood to bad adulthood thing but bad genes no Genes had nothing to do with killing someone else Even if your great uncle killed someone doesnt not mean your going to do it too I think that parents are just trying to find an excuse to blame all of the boys behavior on What I also dont understand is why they didnt all receive the same punishment They each killed someone why would their punishments alter so greatly I think that its absolutely terrible what these boys did Even though they are teenagers they may not have known that what they were going to do would result in death What I mean is that I dont think that what they did was intentional but still very severe None of them should receive a life sentence their just kids they still have yet to finish learning right from wrong and common sense The courts really should have considered this and paid special attention to it Im not saying that they shouldnt be punished but they ought to have special circumstances The kids should have gotten four years until they turn eighteen then they should have received therapy and probation so that someone can
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