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An Argument That Prejudice is the Main Factor That Led to the Holocaust

This is a reflective essay in which the author explains how they feel they would have handled specific circumstances during the Holocaust. They suggest that, as a Jew, they would have resisted being collected to a point. They also mentioned that they would have not put up much resistance once in a concentration camp.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You also did a great job describing how you feel you would personally handle specific situations during the Holocaust. The essay does not have a clear introduction which leads to some confusion about what the purpose of the essay is. The confusion increases when you start using "I" language. It is unclear whether the goal of the essay is to talk about personal attitudes, feelings, and experiences, or to give the history of the Holocaust from a prejudice perspective. Creating an introduction that includes some background information and a guiding thesis statement will help create more logic within the paper. While you have a well-rounded conclusion, it does not seem to relate to the introduction or the body of the paper. The conclusion is an opportunity to summarize the main points made in the body of the essay and to reiterate the goal of the paper. Last, there are a number of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation errors that need to be resolved to make the essay even easier to read."

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