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As her head rose from her tiny hands she glared up at the dark figure standing in front of her The room in which she was sitting was like a cave carved into the side of a tall mountain It was quite dark smelt funny and made her feel insecure Kadie stared at the man sitting in front of her continuously before lowering her face into her hands again Come on love the sooner you tell me the faster you can go home said the man softly as he reached across the desk to wipe a tear from her eye You can trust me you know I cant trust you The only person I can trust is my daddy I love my daddy she snapped back Ok then love tell me about your dad I love my daddy I know you do Kadie but tell me what he is like My daddy is the best dad I could ever have He teaches me everything He is my best friend Can you tell me about your holiday with your dad Kadie Daddy took me on a holiday to Queensland As I emerged from the warm tropical ocean I glanced over to see my dad sunbaking on the on the soft sand Dad loved to lie out in the sun and let he skin absorb the bright rays I caught a wave into the shore and remained in the water keeping a close eye on my prey When I thought it was safe I ran up to our umbrella grabbed my sand bucket and ran as fast as I could back to the waters edge and dived into an oncoming wave I stayed as close as I could to the ground as I observed my target once again When the right time came I filled my sand bucket with the warm salty ocean water and crept cautiously up to it I stood directly above it
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