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I have always wondered why people are so shy around or at the very least act differently towards the opposite sex This reminds me of an experience I had once What happened on my first date what I learned from it Looking back I remember many things about that night like what specifically happened there how I felt during this strange ordeal and finally what I learned from the experience From what I remember before the date even started I must have spent at least two hours getting ready and probably spending 40 minutes of that brushing my hair While I was getting ready the only thing I could hear was my parents nagging me telling me what to do and to be careful but I wasnt listening I was too busy thinking about how much fun I was going to have with my date and how I must look cool in my dates eyes Well when I finally picked my date up she sat next to me in the car and didnt say a thing It was quite odd it was as if she was expecting me to say something but I wasnt paying attention I was too busy anticipating what was to come Looking back I should have consoled her or at least asked how she was but I didnt When we arrived at the theater I quickly paid for our tickets and sat down in the seats While I was watching the movie I felt a strange awkward silence as if something was not right After about half an hour into the movie I got curious so I quickly glanced at my date who looked disappointed somehow But because of my lack of experience with women I didnt know how to approach this so I tried to put my arm around her neck The next thing I knew my own hand was flying full speed back towards my face and my date
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