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Total embarrassment no horror yes that describes what it is likebeing kicked out of a mall with people staring at you it is like purehumiliation It was four years ago when my family took a trip to Chicagofor Christmas and New Years to be with family and my mom decided to seeone of her old college friends so my sister and I had to go with herWe went into downtown Chicago to meet with her When we meet her she hadher two kids with her one my age and one three We went in to a malland it was enormous it had four stories and had almost every storethought of The three years old whose name was Max wanted to go in to Lego Landso we did It was the biggest Lego Land ever Ive ever seen EverywhereI looked were magnificent and extraordinary sculptures made out oflegos Max was running around every where playing with legos and havingfun When we had to leave to go to another store unexpectedly Maxstarted to scream It was so loud that I jumped a little He began tokick and yell and my face was hot with embarrassment and it felt likemy face was burning I began to walk slowly away from the kid as hestared kicking towards me His mother went over to calm him but he wasfurious and was having a temper tantrum He stared yelling like he was about to blow his head off in a highpitched scream NO NO NO NO and Im going back therebecause youre not the boss of me he yelled Youre not my momget off of me I dont like you I thought the kid had lost it he wasgoing crazy I could feel the glaring eyes of everyone in that mallstaring at us with disgust and worry I heard one person say in a softvoice I think that kid is crazy and Whats wrong with hisparents and I agreed with
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