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Greg Booth Mrs Lewis Composition 4A 17 September 2003 A Hole in My Heart Cats make a wonderful pet They are soft tame and can be potty-trained fairly easy My cat recently passed away Her name was Simon Simon was a Siamese cat with pretty blue eyes She had a coat of fur that was as soft as a pillow I loved my cat and wish that she was still alive today Simon was not like most cats She was very energetic and playful She was always there to brighten up a sad day or even a boring one Whenever I called for her Simon would always be close by Everyday I would call for her when I got home from school and every time she would be right beside me in a matter of seconds Often I would fall asleep in my bed and wake up the next morning while she was sleeping by my feet My life turned upside-down last year I came home from school and walked outside to see my favorite cat It was a cold and windy day I called for Simon She did not come to me I became worried that something was wrong I looked for my cat for an hour and still did not find any trace of her I went inside and waited for someone else to come home My step-dad Jeff came home from work and walked out to our shed to see our dog Oh no he shouted No it cant be I came outside to see what had happened and saw Jeff in tears I knew something bad had happened and then thought that maybe it had to do with my missing cat I walked out to the shed and saw Jeff bent over holding something in his arms I only prayed that it was not Simon When I reached the shed and saw my cat in his arms I couldnt hold
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