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Troublesome Brother This older brother of mine seems to always be in some sort of trouble Every time he gets into trouble he has a reason to explain what he did to get into trouble It seems he has it stuck in his head no matter what he does he will always get away with the trouble he caused I myself have never really heard of his troubles coming back to sting him in the butt One main reason could be that he moves out of the area in which his damage had been done To a great many the first impression is Hey hes a good guy but its all a mask really a game to him He tends to keep close attention to whats going on how things are done and how the person reacts to certain occurrences A couple years back he decided that it was time for him to have his own car He went in search of a car till a dealership finally let him get into one As a down payment for the car he offered a thousand dollars down With this kind of a down payment the dealership agreed to give him the car he wanted He gave the dealership 300 cash upfront in agreement that he would return the following day to give them the other 700 At the time he went out and got the car he wasnt even working because a week earlier he was fired The place he worked at fired him because he didnt want to show up for work on time and when he did he never worked a full shift The 300 he put down was the amount he made on his last paycheck He stops by my moms house and shows her the car but then disappears for two weeks During this time the dealership starts calling my moms trying to contact him for the rest of the down payment
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