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Seeing new people new places and being exposed to new experiences it changes people My world was the only place I felt comfortable and safe from the evil exterior that Id made myself believe never existed I closed myself out from love and being loved from taking chances and having enough belief in my own ability to get through the hard times My journey was finding myself Uncovering a girl that appreciated and accepted the world the people in it and finding out where she fits in In my sheltered world I was foolish ignorant and weak My passage opened my eyes my head and my heart to the exquisite world that I knew existed but was always too afraid to search for Id been brought up in a country town where children ran innocently under the sprinklers to escape the harshness of my country sun We roamed our sun bleached land exploring its bulges and curves searching for something - or nothing We were oblivious to those around us We lived without a care in the world we slept - occasionally and we learnt about our selves and each other Then we started growing up People tend to believe that growing up is the same for everyone you hit puberty you feel things youd never felt before you start liking boys - which you could never believe to be possible you get taller fatter you get pimples the size of Mount Everest the grease and oil flows freely and bam youre now a teenager For me it wasnt that straightforward Not only did I get taller and fatter but my parents had loosened my grip on my home the place I felt safe and secure Finger by finger they disconnected my grasp until it was gone Unbeknown to me my journey had begun I had packed up my previous life and was on the road to nowhere My destination a foreign location where everything
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