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An Evaluation of Jig in Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants"

This essay discusses Jig from Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants". The author discusses her weaknesses and relationship to her boyfriend, as well as the complicated issue of abortion.
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K's feedback:

"The focus of this paper is clear, and your opening paragraph clearly defines how you will approach this topic. You have done a great job at supporting your ideas about Jig and why she acts in the ways she does. It's wonderful that you have provided exact quotes from the story, and the outside references are appropriate. To further strengthen this essay, you should refine some of the paragraphs to make them more succinct. This will help your paper feel more focused in addition to making the points you're discussing clearer to the reader. There are also some grammar issues that should be dealt with before submission."

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