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Influential Person Everyone is affected by certain events or individuals At times a drastic change can occur due to their presence and opinions Someone might consider the influence one has and how the environment impacts his or her personality Many people have influenced me during my life The most influential person Ive come across has been my sister Ever since I was a little boy I would look up to her She was always there for me and has set a positive example my allowing my talents to grow Growing up with such a strong role model I developed many of her enthusiasms My sister faced many challenges when she first arrived to this country It was harder for her to become accustomed to a new language and society She faced all the barriers that were placed in her way When I arrived from school she would always tell me how much she missed Bolivia and how she wanted to go back Even though her guidance counselor always gave her a hard time about her lack of academic potential she strived to prove him and all other doubters wrong Her actions influenced me to take the next step This year during the summer I was suppose to attend STEP a program required for all students receiving EOF I didnt want to come and waste my summer at school but I saw that it would help me academically I followed my sisters enthusiasm for learning and I am glad that I attended STEP because it prepared me for my first semester at college My sister has been blessed with traits some people would die for She possesses patience and the willingness to help others There are people that would not assist others because of their lack of patience She made a big impact in my life by always being there when I needed her Whenever I needed help she was there whether it was for
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