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Appealing-to-the-Senses Description Let the reader see smell hear taste and feel what you write in your essay The thick burnt scent of roasted coffee tickled the tip of my nose just seconds before the old faithful alarm blared a distorted top-forty through its tiny top speaker Wiping away the grit of last nights sleep the starch white sunlight blinded me momentarily as I slung my arm like an elephant trunk along the top of the alarm searching for the snooze button While stretching hands and feet to the four posts of my bed my eyes opened after several watery blinks I crawled out of the comforter edging awkwardly like a butterfly from a cocoon swinging my legs over the side of the bed The dusty pebbles on the chilled wood floor sent ripples spiraling from my ankles to the nape of my neck when my feet hit the floor Grabbing the apricot terri-cloth robe recently bathed in fabric softener and October wind I knotted it tightly at my waist like a prestigious coat of armor and headed downstairs to battle the morning Spatial-Order Description Show the reader where things are located from your perspective Billy Rays Pawn Shop and Lawn Mower Repair looked like a burial ground for country auction rejects The blazing red diesel fuel tanks beamed in front of the station looking like cheap lipstick against the pallid wrinkled texture of the parking lot sand The yard not much larger than the end zone at General G Patton High School on the north end of town was framed with a rusted metallic hedge of lawn mowers banana seat bicycles and corroded oil drums It wasnt a calico frame of rusted parts but rather an orchestra of unwanted machinery that Billy Ray had arranged into sections The yellow-tanked mowers rested silently at the right of the diesel fuel Once red now faded orange mowers stood at attention to the left The
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