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eighteen shots of liquid sin The Eighteenth Shot of Liquid Sin The minutes pass by the water falls from bloodshot vacant eyes my heart is torn with pain and fear the anger starts to rise The eighteenth shot of liquid sin cant help me to forget the guilt and shame I feel each day fueled by my regrets I made a sacred promise to God for my life and I a promise which was broken when I saw my baby die The demon in the bottle once again posessed my soul The eighteenth shot of liquid sin would somehow make me whole I really meant those words I said when I promised not to drink but standing by my worthless life I had no time to think It all seemed so surreal that day after all was said and done I started down that lonely path where I had first begun I took my grief my fear and pain and shoved it all away the eighteenth shot of liquid sin would get me through the day Each night I would ask for death when I took a chance to pray my God was gone my life was dead and I was on the way 12 months went by each day I tried to drink my sins away the eighteenth shot of liquid sin was asking me to pay Then one day a friend dropped by concerned that I would die he wouldnt let me stay alone or listen to my lies He helped me find a healing path to grace truth and life I found the way to strength and hope to God I gave my strife I knew the woman who was always there desired a chance to live a loving caring child of God with so much more to give You see I found Im human and prone to make mistakes but Gods love is unconditional hell give you what it
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