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Entertainers nowadays are trying to sell more than just albums and merchandise They are selling sex They are telling young girls that it is okay to walk around half naked Singers like Britney Spears and Christina Aguilera are going around flaunting their bodies in front of young girls and basically telling them that it is okay to dress like them These singers also happen to sell more records and merchandise than singers like Mandy Moore and Jessica Simpson who just want to make music for a living Jessica and Mandy are in my opinion far more talented than Britney and Christina Ever since Britney Spears came out girls and boys alike have been crazy about her Why not She is one of the most popular stars today Shes sold tons of albums and merchandise But thats not what most people are noticing about her They notice the way she dresses She prances around on stage night after night half naked and lip-synching for most of the show If I go to a concert I dont want to pay hard-earned money watching someone lip-synching and prancing around half naked Its stupid She says that her role model is Madonna I grew up listening to Madonnas music Well so did I and most everyone I know but we dont go walking around looking like two-dollar sluts It has gotten completely ridiculous Another person who dresses like this is Christina Aguilera Unlike Britney she can actually sing She has a magnificent voice she just doesnt dress all that magnificently She wears skirts with half of a thong showing She was named by People Magazine as one of the worst dressed celebrities of 2000 Like Britney Christinas role model is also Madonna Madonna was also named one of the worst dressed celebrities of 2000 Some role model huh These and other celebrities like Madonna and Jennifer Lopez arent trying to sell records they are selling their bodies I have
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