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Smoke filled the room as I walked around the green felt My right eye shut tight as my left eye squinted to a narrow slit in a last minute attempt to line up my shot Sweat forming on my scalp as the body heat radiating from my head was trapped with my white UCLA baseball cap I felt nervous This was the most important shot of the game I had to sink the eight ball I looked down the narrow sight line at the white cue ball and then the shiny black marble like material that seemed to be moving in all directions yet going nowhere I noticed my hands shaking as if they were about to have a seizure all their own I closed my eyes and stood straight up in order to calm myself down I walked over to the table where two ladies were sitting watching the game The one on the left offered me a drag of her cigarette to calm my nerves I inhaled deeply and exhaled slowly forming a cloud of smoke under the lantern hanging over the table The smoke filled light made the bar look eerie as if this was all a dream I puts my clammy hands together crossing all of my fingers and pushed out and then in Everyone in the bar could hear the cracking sound of my tense knuckles I walked back over to the green felt that had become my worst nightmare The 300 dollars I had already lost kept running through my brain repeating like an insane man singing the same song over and over I shook my head to release it of the sound and focused on the shot that could determine if I would eat that coming week I powered my hands and chalked up my pool stick for the last time Leaning down and lining up my shot my eye all of the sudden became a sniper rifle
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