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The day could not have been nicer Not one cloud in the sky Just the big blazing ball of fire which shined brightly all day long making the water glisten and sparkle As I walked through the park I took a minute to stand on the shore of the lake to admire the loveliness of the day Looking into the water reflections of surrounding trees bounced off into my eyes Then appearing in the corner of my left eye I noticed a beautiful young girl sitting alone under a tree too staring into the water It was that particular day in which I met the lady of my life I approached her sitting under the tree and carried a day long conversation with her until the sun began to set As it started getting dark we parted agreeing to meet at the same place the next day Out the door I went around 700 AM returning to the park As I approached the tree there she was The grin on my face reached from one ear to the other Again we sat together all day in the park talking playing swimming and just laying together under our tree shading us from the hot bright sun This routine lasted for the next few weeks spending every minute possible together One day she came to me and announced that she was carrying my baby I could not have been more happy until I realized there was slight problem I would not be able to be with them all of the time I still lived with my parents and they were yet to find out about me being a father We continued our relationship throughout her pregnancy solving our problems so we could be together We were to wait until the baby arrived to see what we could work out
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