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I was the sweetest two year old youd ever met I was nice I never wined and I hated dirt I was even a baby model I listened when I was told no and did what I was told But like everyone else I had my moments I had recently turned two when we found out about Sarah Of course we didnt know that she was a she back then In fact we thought she was a he All the way up to her birth we were sure of it Now we just dont know My mom had to buy all new clothes for her Trouble from the start My mom says Sarah was her hardest pregnancy She had diabetes a stoke and was constantly sick The doctors tried to convince my mom to have an abortion There was a very serious risk of both her and the baby dying For some reason she wouldnt listen I try to forgive her for that decision everyone makes mistakes right Unfortunately a healthy baby was born Even worse still she stayed healthy Shes learned a lot like sarcasm manipulation fake crying and nothing else Even though her hairs darkened over the years she will always be a stereotypical blonde No offense Her first week or so home I was begging my mom to take her back to the hospital She tried to do the but your a big sister now thing and attempted to explain that the hospital wouldnt take her back I couldnt blame em Who would want a pale screaming lop When I was awake she was sleeping so I had to be quiet When I was sleeping she was awake But not quiet A few days after she came home from the hospital I was even more annoyed by her than usual She wouldnt stop screaming I told her to stop crying but she wouldnt listen I told her that Im the big sister
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