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The day was perfect on May 10 1981 and it was Mothers Day The sun was shining warmly and the grass soft blades of emerald green on a background of a deep blue sky To celebrate my two sisters my parents andI decided to have a bar-b-que We invited our boyfriends a few close family member and some friends My sisters Kay and Ilene were celebrating their graduation from college After graduation they were going to Hawaii with some of their classmates Life was greatLaughter flowed freely as the sdcent of a fresh crust for a pie was in the air My dad Bart was at the grill closely watching the hamburgers and hot dogs sizzle making sure they did not burn Ilenes fiance Kevin and Kays boyfriend Jake had just returned from the store with buns sodas and chips We were all enjoying one anothers company Kay had just taken the pie crust out of the oven and was taking it out the back door to cool when it slipped from her grasp and fell to the ground She ws c rushed No one thought a whole lot about it Her spirits were lifted when Kevin suggested they all go water skiing Everyone was able to go but me I had to work that night at the local theater and on a Friday night was unable to find somene to work for me I could only think about how great the water would have felt It was about two oclock when they all headed up to the lake My mom told my sisters to be hom eby eleven Tehy skiied most of they day and ahad a great time When I got home from work that night Jakes new Porsche was not in the driveway so I didnt think to much about it I knew that he was letting Jamie drive it home so I just walked in thehouse without a
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