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Freedom to Breathe Running here running there doing this doing that arguing listening talking working what about me Like millions of people I have a busy life Its hard to find time in a day just to breathe collect my thoughts or just relax when Im always spending time on everything else Sometimes its impossible to find a few moments to spare I have a place I like to go a place no one knows about but me that helps me relax First my place is down by a river right off the highway There is a place I drive into park my car and sit by the river It smells of flowers and dirty river however the smell is the least of my worries after a long day I can see cars passing by through the trees I can see birds flowers and trees The trees recently changing color have red green yellow and orange leaves floating off them as the wind blows The flowers which were yellow and red earlier this year are all wilting and dying off for the cold winter to come I see two blue jays flying around my area quite often The river is darkened by pollution filled with fish to unknowingly be caught by the fishermen I hear the sounds of the river current rustling through the air as I sit on the large rocks banking the river letting my troubles of the day get taken away by the current I hear cars racing by on the highway sometimes I hear the gentle rushing of the current along with the blue jays singing in the background As I walk along the grass I hear the crunching of the crisp colored leaves under my feet This place is unique to me because its the only place I can go to collect my thoughts all alone I was having a bad day one day
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