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An Introduction to the Process of Carbon Dating

This informative essay discusses carbon dating. The student gives details about how carbon builds up inside organisms and how scientists use carbon levels to determine the age of organic remains.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've amassed some good information about carbon dating and you have the start of a good paper. However, there are several issues that affect the clarity of your essay. First, there is a lot of informal language that does not fit the tone of an academic paper. For example, you use the word "they" throughout the paper without indicating who "they" are. Much of the information is given without context, and there is not a logical flow of information. Consider working closely with an editor to organize your paper such that information that is critical to understanding the concepts you discuss is given in the beginning of the paper. You will also want to address awkward and confusing sentence structure as well as run-on sentences and transitions."

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