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An Overview of Abraham Lincoln's Life and Accomplishments

In this informative essay, a student provides a brief overview of Abraham Lincoln’s life and accomplishments. The student discusses the hardships Lincoln faced while growing up and the significance of the Emancipation Proclamation.
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Angela's feedback:

"You successfully summarize Abraham Lincoln’s life and involvement in politics, and it stands out that you understand and were able to explain the scope of the Emancipation Proclamation. From here, focusing on formatting your paper in a more uniform manner will give your work more polish. The first line of each paragraph should be indented by half an inch, and all paragraphs should be flush left. In addition, all paragraphs should feature 2.0 line spacing, and the same font and font size should be maintained throughout the paper, including in your header and works cited section. Single quotation marks should be used instead of double quotation marks when you have a set of quotes within quotes. A final edit is recommended to address various writing convention errors such as the typo “ha” instead of “he.” When introducing a notable figure, the person’s first and last name should be used. After that, the individual should be referred to by last name only."

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