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An Overview of Current Major Threats to the Great Barrier Reef

This essay provides a detailed informative presentation of the current threats to the Great Barrier Reef, focusing on the causes and effects of coral bleaching, overfishing, and pollution. The paper ends with a call to action toward individual behavioral changes.
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Bridget's feedback:

"This is an excellent presentation: good control of language and mechanics, good rhetorical and structural balance of broad themes and persuasive details with calls to action, and clear demonstration of mastery of the topic. My main reservation is in the formatting and visual impact (as rhetorical device): while overall neat and easy to navigate, it does produce rather large blocks of text in the body sections that may impact readability. Your writing and organization is strong, so the argument within each section flows well and is easy to follow once the reader is within the paragraph, so breaking up the body sections into parts would be to refine the reader's experience."

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