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An Overview of Entrepreneurs and the Economic Impact of Entrepreneurship

In this informative essay, a student provides an overview of entrepreneurs and entrepreneurship. The student explains what it means to be an entrepreneur and describes the impact entrepreneurs have on a country’s economy.
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Angela's feedback:

"You provide a solid overview of what it means to be an entrepreneur and how entrepreneurs contribute to a country’s economy, but your essay could use more work to address formatting and writing convention issues. In terms of formatting, the work would be more polished if you maintained the same font and font color throughout the paper. Your parenthetical citations also need some revision to ensure that they follow MLA style: for example, (Kane 1). Some sentences -- such as the ones that begin “Entrepreneurs are important” and “In addition, new” -- have parallel structure problems. Sentence fragments -- such as the ones that begin “Also generating their” and “The concept of” -- should be recast to improve the flow of your paper. Many terms such as “world,” “entrepreneurship,” “inventions,” and “computers” should not be capitalized when they appear in the middle of a sentence. Meanwhile, a proper noun such as a name (e.g., “Steve Jobs”) and the beginning of a sentence should always be capitalized."

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