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An Overview of Indian Culture with Emphasis on Social Customs

In this research essay, a student discusses different facets of Indian culture. The student provides an overview of social customs within the country and describes its geography.
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Angela's feedback:

"You successfully provide some detailed explanations of different social customs in India. However, your discussion of the country's geography isn't tied very well to the broader topic of Indian culture. Geography can be important, for example, in influencing the development of a religion or the distribution of power among people. Whatever main topics you discuss should be linked back to the topic of Indian culture as a part of your analysis. It would also be a good idea to clearly define what your main topics are in your introduction, and more specifically, in your thesis statement. Then you can organize your body paragraphs according to these topics, which would help the reader more easily navigate through your essay. An edit is recommended to address various writing convention issues. For example, there are many words such as "culture" and "prior" that have been unnecessarily capitalized. Recasting sentence fragments will significantly improve the flow of your writing, and providing in-text citations for any directly quoted material will strengthen your credibility as an author. Note that the practice of inserting two spaces in between sentences is an outmoded one; today, the majority of American English writing style guides advocate using one space only."

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