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The Internal Story of Edna in The Awakening by Kate Chopin

This is an analytical essay in which the author discusses "The Awakening" written by Kate Chopin. The author goes into detail about the internal story of the main character Edna Pontellier and how the character finds herself through realizations and determinations.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have gone into great detail and have provided a significant amount of evidence to support the theme of your paper. While your text is organized in a logical manner, you should include an introduction that ends with a thesis statement that guides your writing and lets the reader know what to expect is coming. You have several small quotes within the body of your essay. The presence of these, along with paraphrasing, makes it so that citations should appear throughout your text to avoid plagiarism issues. There are a number of grammar and punctuation errors throughout the essay that should be resolved. Last, end your essay with a more elaborate conclusion. The conclusion should summarize all of the main points in the essay and should reiterate the thesis statement. "

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