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An Overview of the Macy's Corporation

This is a business profile of the Macy's corporation. The student examines its structure, business model, and competition.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is a well-written and well-organized paper. Your introduction and conclusion are concise and on-topic, and the paper as a whole seems to be well-researched. There are a number of grammatical and stylistic issues that should be addressed. The comma before "Inc." as in "Macy's, Inc." is optional. However, you should either use or omit the comma consistently throughout your paper. Make sure your pronouns reflect the correct subjects. For instance, under Elasticity Discussion, you refer to the customers, then use "they" to refer to Macy's rather than the customers. The term "our communities" in the last supporting paragraph should be reworked as first-person references should be avoided in formal papers. Watch out for sentence fragments as well. A thorough round of proofreading would ensure that this is a top-notch paper."

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