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An Overview of the War of 1812

This essay gives an overview of the War of 1812. The student identifies the reasons for the war, the people involved, and the impact that the conflict had on several nations.
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Bob's feedback:

"You have a good grasp of the major consequences of the War of 1812. However, this essay jumps around a lot and isn't very focused. Your introduction should build to a single overarching point rather than try to introduce too many ideas at once. Under the heading "Who led them and Why," giving the dates and causes of death seems unnecessary as the deaths are unrelated to the subject of the paper. This interrupts the flow of the essay greatly. Make sure to stay on task in each paragraph and use transitions where necessary. Throughout the essay, watch out for repetition and make sure to have the paper proofread to address several errors in grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation."

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