An Unexpected Detour on the Way to the Temple

In this narrative, a writer describes a trip to the temple that takes a strange detour to an interesting house.

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"What a fun story! You not only did a good job of providing concrete details here, but you did a good job of creating suspense and curiosity in the way you allow the story to unfold. To make your story stronger, I would recommend that you clear up the spacing, missing punctuation, sentence structure, and capitalization errors. While those don't seem like a big deal on the surface, punctuation plays a super-important role in how each sentence is read, and you want to control the impact those sentences have. Be sure to leave full spaces between each paragraph, too, if you choose not to indent new paragraphs."

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Kibin. (2025). An unexpected detour on the way to the temple. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-unexpected-detour-on-the-way-to-the-temple-KhqCR4BO

Be sure to capitalize proper nouns (e.g. Egypt) and titles (e.g. Macbeth) in the essay title portion of your citation.

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("An Unexpected Detour on the Way to the Temple.")

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