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Analysis of Jean Shinoda Bolen's Blog on Women's Circles

In this analytical essay, a student looks at how Jean Shinoda Bolen uses her blog to effectively convey her beliefs about women and their abilities. The student delves into Bolen's diction and the comparisons she makes when explaining women's circles to demonstrate how Bolen communicates her ideas.
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Angela's feedback:

"It is evident that you put thought into figuring out how Bolen effectively shares her ideas about women's circles. Your essay features plenty of analysis and stays on topic according to the thesis you laid out. However, various formatting considerations should be addressed. For example, the odd spacing between your paragraphs is visually distracting and does detract from the reading experience. In addition, sometimes you refer to a specific blog post by saying something like "this blog post," but it's unclear which blog post you're actually talking about. If Bolen's different blog posts are titled, it may be a good idea to include their titles in your essay."

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