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Analysis of the Film Fantastic Mr. Fox by Wes Anderson

In this analytical essay, a student discusses the film Fantastic Mr. Fox by Wes Anderson. The student talks about some motifs in the movie and how they refer to real-world problems with corporations and environmental destruction.
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Angela's feedback:

"You provide some interesting analysis of the film, particularly with your interpretations concerning Anderson's criticism of corporations. While you open your essay with a good short summary of the movie, the introduction ends on a confusing note since it's not clear what your thesis statement is. Moving through your body paragraphs, this lack of clarity regarding your main argument continues. Your body paragraphs work as individual pieces, but it's unclear how they relate to one another or how they all work together to support a single overarching point about the movie. In terms of your writing conventions, there are issues with verb tense. You also have a tendency to be inconsistent with your pronouns in a given statement; so for example, you'll start a statement using "you" and then shift to using "one" for the rest of the sentence. Finally, to strike a more academic tone with your work, avoid using contractions."

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