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Analysis of the Setting in “On a Sidewalk Bleeding” by Evan Hunter

In this analytical essay, a student considers how the setting in “On the Sidewalk Bleeding” by Evan Hunter helps establish the story’s tragic tone. The student reflects on the rain’s relationship to Andy.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a good job of explaining how different elements of the setting help establish the desired mood for the story. However, words such as “sidewalk,” “natural,” and “window” should not be capitalized when they appear in the middle of a sentence (and are not a part of the story’s title). Your semicolon use needs revision, and review is also needed to ensure that every sentence ends with punctuation. When a sentence ends with a quote, the period comes before the closing quotation mark. Awkward phrases such as “Andy questioned himself” should be recast for clarity."

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