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Analyzing the Successes of the UAE's COVID Vaccine Rollout

This report examines the UAE's response to the COVID-19 crisis in 2020, focusing on the country's successful vaccine rollout, which had by summer 2021 fully vaccinated almost 75% of the population. The student considers such elements as the immediate response that imposed mobility restrictions, the Hope Consortium, storage and distribution, the use of apps and other digital infrastructure, and ground-level implementation (drive-through and walk-in clinics). The student credits the success to preexisting logistical strengths and a focus on adaptation while also describing areas of improvement, including improving appointment wait times, continuing to build demand through vaccine awareness, and diversifying sources.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You've done a great job crafting an efficiently argued and well-organized presentation that lays out the question, explores its angles, and provides a clear conclusion; including the improvements section brings depth to that conclusion and reinforces your ethos as the author. (I do want to check in regarding source use and how you will present your research to the reader, whether by in-text citation, a bibliography, etc.)

Overall, the higher-order concerns are in very good shape and you can turn your attention to the lower-order concerns of writing mechanics and similar that help ensure a polished product. There are enough error, typos, or similar issues that make the reading experience bumpy at times, forcing the reader to decipher rather than focus on the concepts and argumentation. For example, the sentence "(It was first delivered to army soldiers in December..." encounters a few minor, localized opportunities for clean up: closing up the parentheses, using brackets around "ESSS" if that is still within the original parentheses, and fixing up "I used to be ready" -- possibly a missing word or "used" should be replaced with a more precise verb for clarity and accuracy. So, as you can see, these will be small, focused tasks that can be caught and amended with a careful proofread that targets mechanics of punctuation and grammar."

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