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Its a Terrifying World After All I couldnt wait for my family and I to take our annual vacation It was during those times that I enjoyed myself most I had anticipated this vacation to be the best After all I was going to Disney World the greatest place in the world Little did I know I was about to embark on a journey that would leave a scare in my memory permanently The incident took place more than twelve years ago yet I can recall the date and time as if it were yesterday The date Saturday June 13 1987 the time 200 in the afternoon The sun was at its peak and it felt as if it was hot enough to fry an egg in the middle of the street As the large doughy hand reached down to grab mine I began to panic My palms began to sweat and I could feel my heart pumping wildly This giant monstrosity before me was huge His hand drawing closer to mine my heartbeat grew with intensity Id never been so frightened I could hear my mothers sweet faint voice from beside me saying Go ahead honey shake his hand I remember looking at her and looking at the hand getting closer to me I immediately took off I wasnt running to escape fear I felt as if I was running to save my life I ran through hordes of people People who were talking so loudly I couldnt hear myself think I had no idea where I was going The sweet smell of cotton candy was in the air I could feel gum underneath my shoes and I could see traces of peanuts on the ground As sweat was starting to trickle down my face I continued to run faster and faster As I continued to run I could hear a song repeating the same words over and over
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