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Andy Mulligan's Trash: Character Development and Language Features

This assignment provides several long answers to questions about the novel Trash (by author Andy Mulligan). The student discusses character development and language features.
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MJ's feedback:

"Your assignment clearly addresses all of the prompts, incorporating evidence from the text and demonstrating thoughtful analysis. Consider adding a few additional examples to Part B; you have only provided examples for foreshadowing and similes, but you list personification, analogy, and metaphors as features as well. Choosing examples of each from the text will provide stronger support for your answer. Be mindful of how you integrate quotations into the surrounding text, as those transitions are a bit clunky at times. Your control of grammar and punctuation is good overall, but you do have a tendency to mix verb tenses when referring to the text. Usually, we use "literary present tense" when discussing literature, meaning that we use present-tense verbs when referring to the text. For example, instead of "the author used," one would write "the author uses.""

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