Animal Justice: Respect for Animals' Rights Needs Immediate Attention
In this essay, a student argues that animals deserve better treatment and that their rights deserve respect. The student discusses animal cruelty, animal testing, farming conditions, and other violations of animal rights to support their argument.
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"You have the start to a good essay here, but it needs some work to reach its full potential. The first thing I would recommend to improve it is to separate your ideas into paragraphs. This goes for your introduction and conclusion, especially, but I would also break your essay's body into distinct paragraphs that are each focused on one subtopic of your argument. For instance, you could devote one paragraph to animal testing, one to animal cruelty, one to farming conditions, etc. This will make it much easier for your reader to digest the important points you make here.
Next, I would recommend that you add some credibility to your essay by citing your research. You do mention the sources you consulted in your text on a few occasions, but proper in-text citations will make it more clear which information comes from which source.
Finally, I would recommend working with a professional or peer editor to clear up the grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. Your word processing program can also help you catch many of these errors."
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