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Another Girl It was a hot August afternoon about 1230 pm I was just about to take a nice warm relaxing bath I was starting college in just a few more days and there were not going to be many more of these days where I could sit back and relax As I was getting in the bath my phone rang and it was my boyfriend Jeff I had not talked to him in two days and I was so glad to hear his voice He was a senior in high school so he had already started back to school He was calling to ask me to come and meet him for lunch at Sonic which is a local drive-in restaurant where I worked I figured it would just be him and me He told me to meet him there at 130 pm I was ecstatic because we were not able to see each other as much as we would like since his dad forbidden me to see him When we got the chance to see each other I did not pass it up I went and got ready as I decided to wear my blue shirt and khaki shorts That was one outfit he always thought I looked good in Once I was r eady I decided I would leave and get to Sonic a little before 130 just incase he showed up earlier then planned I arrived at 120 he had not arrived yet At 135 he had still not showed up I started thinking of excuses to tell myself I thought maybe he got held up finishing his French test or maybe he got stuck in traffic When 140 came around I began to worry he just had never been one to run late I began to think he was not coming In the meantime I was hungry so I ordered I figured he would come and everything would be fine
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