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Article Analysis of "Why Don't Convenience Stores Sell Better Food?"

A student analyzes Olga Khazan's article "Why Don't Convenience Stores Sell Better Food?" and describes the benefits and drawbacks of selling fresh produce in convenience stores. The student touches upon the impact access to these foods might have on health metrics such as the obesity rate.
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Erin's feedback:

"While you do engage with Khazan's article somewhat, your overall purpose for writing isn't clear: are you analyzing or challenging her viewpoints, or summarizing them? It seems that you raise more questions than you answer, so just be aware that if your intent is to take a stance on the author's views, you may have a bit more writing to do here. In terms of organization, your essay might also read better broken into 2-3 paragraphs, if allowed by your assignment. Your grammar and punctuation are well-controlled, though there are a few errors I'd recommend correcting before submission."

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