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SEVENTEEN She didnt understand why everyone seemed to fade away She is just 17 She is such a baby She needs to grow up a little Its not the years in your life that count Its the life in your years She would tell them HER story But why They wouldnt listen She is only 17 She is suffering No shes happy She is grateful She thanks God for what she has She doesnt complain Its just wanting a life She cant seem to know people in this town They are aliens She is sitting outside of caf with her friend drinking her cappuccino and smoking a cigarette The evening breeze enlightens her She ordered stuffed mushrooms with vegetables Lonely is a man without love Sometimes she cries For no reason No shes happy She just wants to move to THAT city Its calling her Thats where she is supposed to be Thats where people from her planet live Shes confused She just moved from another world but she doesnt miss it She misses THAT city Even these candles are different here Its like they know where shes coming from Candles She loves her dad Hes always with her Sounds cliche But theres no other way to explain it Only people who never lost anyone who they loved wont understand But she doesnt care It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all She wishes she was more close to him But she was just a child Wait it was only 2 years ago Feels like forever though Some people change more in 2 years than other do in 20 Only the good die young That is why immortality is reserved for the greatest of evils She has time They will see
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