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Augustine and His Desire for a Relationship with God

This essay is about the conflict that Augustine faces in "Confessions VIII: Vocation & Baptism." The essay goes into detail about the struggle between the two wills: the one that wants to pursue carnal desires and the one that wants to have a relationship with God.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done an excellent job detailing the conflict that Augustine experienced between the two wills. You also have done a great job integrating evidence and quotes to support your position. Because the introduction lacks a thesis statement, from the beginning it is unclear what you are specifically trying to accomplish with your paper. Consider allowing the introduction to be an opportunity to introduce the text to the reader and explain the point of the paper. The conclusion covers the main points of the paper but could be elaborated upon. There are inconsistent spacing issues throughout the paper and there are a number of grammar and punctuation errors. Many of the grammar errors can be resolved by changing the word order. Many of the punctuation errors are a lack a space between the end of the text in a sentence and the citation. "

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