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While thinking about what to write about for my autobiographical essay I looked at a special clock that I got from my uncle for Christmas This clock was special in that it keeps track of the time by lifting up a metal balls one at a time to the top with a motor that has a plastic arm and drops the ball off in rows When a row is filled the hour is over and the row is then dumped and the process cycles through again with the same metal balls in the same order Reaching out to play around with this sensitive system I knock one row and all the balls fell out of placed Reassembling the system reminded me about the time when I had to go to school for the first time My days were routine like how a ball on my clock would cycle through the hours and be at the same location everyday I would wake up and remembering my manners that my mom taught me say good morning to my grandparents After that I would go brush my teeth which my grandpa would check afterwards to see that I have really had brushed them Giving the okay my grandma would serve me breakfast everyday consisting of two scrambled eggs and rice By this time my older cousins would arrive at my house and grandma would serve them too After they finished eating I would never have time to play with them because they would leave right afterwards with my grandpa At the afternoon my grandpa would be back with my cousins then I would finish the rest of my day playing with them That was my day I would always see the same people everyday like my clock would line up the same metal balls right next to each other every hour The next day the cycle would start over again for a good two years There were
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