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Waking up delusional and unfamiliar with the surrounding was only trivial in comparison to the needles injected into my forearm I was completely exhausted and reality was a blur For some odd reason I had spent three weeks in the hospital while my mom at my bedside cried her eyes out I was four years old and diagnosed with bacterial meningitisUpon arriving home I was carried from the car onto the couch Although I was recovering from a dazed and confused state I didnt really understand why I couldnt have just walked myself however it didnt take long to realize My legs were useless I could not fathom why they didnt move on command All I simply wanted to do was run around and maybe cause a little trouble along the way After a full recovery I was back on my feet and ready to start a major milestone in my life elementary school The first day of school I was raging with excitement and unable to contain myself With my new backpack strapped on I walked with confidence and breathed only the air of success What I thought would be the most exciting six years of my life took a turn for the worse The majority of my classmates breezed through each subject one by one and while attempting to keep up I inevitably trailed behind I couldnt read so I attend special reading classes math and science baffled me and my handwriting seemed as if all the letters on the page decided to crash into each other I had lost all hope and nothing could compensate for my inability to learn My mom later informed me that the meningitis I had when I was four had greatly affect my brains development While those whom survive meningitis have the potential of being mentally retarded deaf or having frequent seizures I was comforted with the thought of being physically and mentally healthy Her words burned
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