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Baseball Players: A Comparison and Contrast

This argumentative and persuasive essay talks about the many aspects of baseball, including players and comparisons between them.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
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Christina's feedback:

"When it comes to your content, you gave good information to show you understand your topic. You are able to reason it out and give specific examples to prove the points you made. Regarding focus, ensure the reader is able to understand from the first paragraph what you are trying to convey overall. This will give the reader a preview of what they are about to read. When it comes to organization, you want to really focus on your transitions. Transitions act as a bridge to easily smooth the way from one paragraph to the next, so you could reference something in the last paragraph as you introduce your next paragraph. For instance, when you get into the topic of Cody Bellinger, you could say, “Unlike Ken Griffey Jr., Cody Bellinger is proving himself to be the likely 2019 NL MVP, as he is having an incredible season…” With formatting, the large paragraphs makes it more difficult on the eyes to really focus on the information. You might want to break those down and make it a bit easier on the eyes to take it all in. Also, when you give an acronym, such as IC or BC, you want to let the reader know what it stands for, so the reader can have a better grasp on what they are reading. Regarding punctuation and grammar/spelling issues, the paper could benefit from a round of proofreading to ensure those concerns are resolved."

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