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"You have done a good job specifically talking about why you think you will make a good patrol officer. You have presented your perspective on your qualities in a logical manner. I would consider changing the order of information at the beginning of the essay. Start the essay letting the reader know that the reason why you are writing this is because you want to be a patrol officer. There is a minor amount of grammar, sentence structure, and spacing errors throughout the essay that need to be resolved. Consider sounding more confident in your conclusion. You do not want to make the reader feel as if you have left out any information."
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