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Being a Part of a Team Is Better Than Working Alone

In this argumentative essay, a student considers whether it is better to be a part of a team or work alone. The student asserts that being a part of a team is better than working individually on something because you can reach greater heights and learn valuable life skills by collaborating with others.
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Angela's feedback:

"Your stance on the issue is clear, and you include some valid reasoning about the positive aspects of working on a team. However, you're lacking a thesis statement where you not only share your stance on the issue but also your main supporting points. You should revise your thesis to include the main ideas you discuss in your body paragraphs, which seem to be about how teams can accomplish more than a single individual and how teamwork teaches valuable life skills. A thorough edit is needed to address various writing convention issues, including run-on sentences and sentence fragments. There are also spacing and punctuation problems as well as instances where typos may have occurred."

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