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Betrayal and the Repercussions that Follow

This narrative tells the story of a girl who felt betrayed while in school and the repercussions of that fateful day.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
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- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley

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Christina's feedback:

"You did a great job ensuring your reader had great content and they were able to experience the situation alongside you. What you wrote was vivid, and as it was read, the reader could "see" it happening. You also transitioned well from subject to subject, ensuring a smooth read. For the conclusion, you want to give a brief overview of the essay and leave the reader with a takeaway, as this will give the work a sense of finality. Let's review your guidelines for MLA format, particularly on last name and page number placement (on the top right side). You would benefit from a minor round of proofreading to ensure any issues with grammar and punctuation are resolved before submitting your work."

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