Big Business and the Gilded Age in the United States

This essay discusses the effect of big business in America's Gilded Age.

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"This essay needs a structure, including an introduction, a body, and a conclusion. You provide good content, but the structure makes it hard for the reader to comprehend it. Information should not be repeated. Your essay consists of a page-long paragraph, which is hard for readers to follow. Break your writing into paragraphs according to topic. If you refer to writer Theodore Dreiser, you have misspelled his name. You repeat terms and information, such as “have large businesses have an impact” and “with the major change came … answers to changes.” The first two sentences both cite the effect of big business on the economy, as well as the timeframe when this occurred. This is written a third time near the end of this essay. A company name, Standard Oil, is not capitalized, and the term “gilded age,” as a historical period, should be capitalized. You insert numbers 1–6 without explaining what they mean. If you are making six points, then you should say that. There is an incomplete sentence (“With the big business …”), which lacks a verb acting on a subject. You should write concisely and clearly, and run a grammar checker to identify and fix problems."

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Kibin. (2025). Big business and the gilded age in the united states. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/big-business-and-the-gilded-age-in-the-united-states-Hrve6zsE

Be sure to capitalize proper nouns (e.g. Egypt) and titles (e.g. Macbeth) in the essay title portion of your citation.

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("Big Business and the Gilded Age in the United States.")

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