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Body Image in the Workplace Analyzed Through Natural, Applied, and Social Science Lenses

This is an informative essay about body image and appearance in the workplace. The author looks at this topic through the natural and applied science lens and the social science lens. According to the author, natural science is associated with biology, chemistry, and physics, and applied science is associated with science, technology, engineering, and mathematics. When studying body image through the natural science lens, the brain is looked at (insular cortex, sensory processing, feelings and emotions, autonomical and motor control, risk prediction and decision making, bodily and self-awareness, complex social functions). The body is also looked at at the cellular level. When body image is studied through the applied science lens, it is determined how mathematics (percentage of tall CEOs) and technology (social media) play a role in someone's career. The social science lens uses different mediums such as psychology, economics, geography, and sociology. The author notes how body image can affect self-esteem and lead to depression and eating disorders.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done an excellent job with this paper, and only a few minor changes are needed to improve it significantly. Since you have written such a clear and concise introduction with a straightforward thesis statement, the purpose of your paper is well-articulated. You then have organized the body of the paper in a way that aligns with your introduction, so it is clear that you remain focused on the topic.

A couple of places in the document could benefit from some elaboration because, when they are read, a question comes up in the reader's mind, or they are left confused. One such example is that it isn't clear what you by "the mathematics behind how body appearance in an organization plays a role in someone's career." To improve the organization of your paper, I recommend that you write a conclusion. The conclusion of a piece is the opportunity to summarize the main points you made in the essay's body and relate them to the thesis statement.

Overall, you did an excellent job with APA formatting. You can remove your name from the header, and you should italicize titles in your references. Last, as I read, I ran across several places where you used the wrong words (e.g., 'an' instead of 'and'). To resolve these issues, slowly read through the document or use the editor function in the word processing software."

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