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The harder you work the harder it is to surrender VinceLombardiThey say that hard work pays off and it does You probably have heardit numerous times Parents say it relatives say it and evengrandparents say it I have participated in football for four years nowand it is pretty much my life besides school I have devoted my time andeffort to football and worked out daily so that I can become a betterplayerIt was a chilly and rainy afternoon You could hear the footballplayers huffing and puffing from the exhausting drills that the coacheshad set up An hour in to the practice I started to feel an achingfeeling in my back I thought it hurt because of drills so I finishedpractice with the achy feeling in my back After practice I informedthe trainer and she said nothing was wrong with it but I put a bigfreezing ice pack just in case anything was wrong I continued my day bygoing home and doing my homework A few weeks later the pain became soagonizing that I would walk weird and my right leg felt like it wasgoing to be numb I could not do any physical activity at all It tookmy mom forever to get an appointment with the doctor because of her busywork schedule Finally she set up an appointment with the doctor amonth afterOn the day of the appointment we traveled to the doctors office Wewaited for a good 30 minutes then met with the doctor Mr Becker Iinformed him about my situation with my back receiving excruciatingpain As soon as he knew what was going on he told me that I was Vicente 2going to get some x-rays to make sure that nothing major has happened Iwas taken to different room for the x-ray After the x-ray scan theworker brought it to Dr Beckers room and we examined the x-raystogether for a few minutes then he told me what was wrong He told
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