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Daddy left us on July 20 2011 Every day I cry because I miss him so much I know that he was very ill but that does not stop the human side of me from wanting him to still be here I love him and I miss him A piece of my heart is so broken that it gone It can never be the same again it is deadDad walked into the hospital under his own power on June 28 For the first two weeks he was very feisty Right now he would say You get me out of this place He was so full of fight that I did not see the end even as I looked right at it Near the end of his second week in the hospital he had a bad reaction to a new medication At this point he stopped trying to feed himself I knew his heart was bad I should have seen it coming but I did not He had a pacemaker and multiple stints in his heart I just kept saying He will make it through this because he is the strongest person I knowThen his kidneys shut down He started dialysis and did not react well to it He still demanded to go home and I still told myself he would Next he was placed on twenty-four hour dialysis I was so scared but he still had so much fight that I did not even consider the possibility that he was that close to the endLate in the night on July 16 the call came that Dads heart had stopped and he was now in Intensive Care The whole family gathered to talk with the ICU physician We were informed that the next twenty-four hours would be critical There was the possibility of brain damage We only wait and see We went back to see Dad in sets of three It was quite
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