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Currently I am not involved in any extracurricular activities I know it may be a little late but I am trying to raise my GPA higher its a personal goal I am striving for it took a while to learn that school comes first and everything else is a slow second but I get it now Like my grandmother use to say its never to late to do right Anyway earlier in the year I transferred from Flint Central to Flushing High I played for the football team my positions were corner back strong safety and outside linebacker Id done very well for a transfer into their program just learning the system I had lead the team in tackles in the first few games but around the fourth or fifth game teams began to run away from my side thats when I was moved to defensive back So that I could be put into position to make plays again I brought a new type of attitude and style to the team Them being raised in the suburbs and me being born and raised in Flint we had different ways of a ttacking the game They had more of a laid back and just play the game type of way of playing the game while I had more of a in your face I am the greatest of all time you cant touch me Im unstoppable type of way of playing I think we learned a lot from each other me being the way I am I was some what a leader to them and I feel the same way about them 4 My sophomore year was by far the year where I felt the most motivated and self-confident than I ever have That year my grades were good I was getting put up to the varsity squad in football and things couldnt be going any better at home It was just one
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